in class writing assignment

The problem is that animal preservation throughout the world is becoming less important and that species are rapidly dwindling down.
It is important because these are amazing animals that are being hunting, poached, or becoming extinct and something needs to be done.
The people affected are the people of the earth who love animals and are trying to help all the species in danger of becoming extinct, or people who want to end poaching.
People might disagree that there are plenty of animals on the planet and that only a few species are becoming extinct, and one also might argue that the killing of these animals are necessary in the sense that items can be collected from their body for for or money selling purposes.