I changed the overall structure of my paper in a big way. I decided to to have a longer introduction followed by the different views concerning the topic which i did not originally have.

The strongest element of my paper is how well i can convey the side that cares for the animals and the difference between the side that does not care for them nor believe in extinction.

I am concerned that the only side i have good information or enough information on is the people who do not try to help endangered species or species that are on the verge of being extinct, and that i did not pick a good enough topic that has two equal sides because most people want to protect animals as well as like these animals.